Please avoid this, it pains my heart: "It was time for Wang Xue I mean Bai Xia..."
"him/her" decide
"*the following 659 words were exempted*" I would rather a more formal novel, but do I get there are few options
"A martial soul appeared, but somehow it was different? (People: WELL NO SH*T IT IS)" again formality, both in the sentence and the parentheses
"QI" capitals pls (qidian international)
"I'm sorry. I forgot about Grammarly-san to edit this and correct some stuff and now she's lonely. Sorry *bows down* Hmmm, do I release TSASS chapter now or later >:D" pls pls author note
Please avoid hypocrisy, it ruins a story (not that you are doing this)
good base, develop it well
if you want an editor yeah i can do some
Thank you
quality not bad
stability idek so 4
development hasnt happened
design um yeah
world so far good but 5 is perfect so yeah