Mafia’s Little Dove - Reviews

Then, the thermometer protruding from her butts like a tail moved *pikupiku*

Just by seeing a not yet pregnant young girl with a swelling stomach filled with semen arouses me too much, so I take a picture and save it

Beneath her fake smiles he could see the real her , still stubborn and sharp but an insecure child who dreamed of the prince charming that her books described . Once in the past he was her hero . Everytime she had a problem he would be there listening .

and never let go for all eternity

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Bowet – saya sangat ingin di gaji dolar US saja dan tidak terlalu tinggi hanya 15.000$

The story had its exciting moments, but the development of the main character ruined everything. Even after 520 chapters, the main character behaves foolishly, failing to use his space power when necessary, and constantly getting beaten up by others. He still hasn't developed his Aura, which all the other characters have already accomplished. He recklessly engages in death matches all the time, yet there's still no progress in his Aura development. I've decided to stop reading this because I can't push forward anymore.

For a "modern" story, the world this takes place in is still future dystopian. The world building is somewhat there, but it seems that organized crime is the true government in all the cities. The focus on the MC has distracted from better character development of any of the peripheral characters leaving the story to feel unbalanced. This could get better over time. I've really enjoyed MVS and think it had better direction and focus from the start. This story needs more of both.

I guess it’s interesting? we will see if it fall or land or fly to the heavens and become a new star for us.  i read the intro just now and from it i can conclude as the wise sage the MC will die many times.

I love it I'm not lying this book is good . The character the names and even writing style. You use poems. The most wonderful thing about this reading is that the author conveys that he is in full control of the story, taking it exactly where he had planned and not like many works that a compendium of recurring improvisation.

I absolutely enjoy this novel, but I can't say too much since I'm only 30 chapters in so far definitely recommend this one! ?u200d? can't wait for more.