Ma lon - The Ghost Can Ritual - Reviews

Two months after I joined the league, I get my first mission.

  I stood up from the couch, took my pistol and my machete at the side of the couch, and followed him to the garage. As we walk in, I heard a loud crack at the back of the house near the kitchen.

After thousands of years trying to look for them with no avail, it is a clear thing that they really cease from this world.

"Car! Where the f"ck are you Carl!" I heard a voice, that voice! I tought  my suffer is already over? The monster? Why he still a life?

THIS NEEDS MORE REVIEWS BECAUSE YES?!?!!??!!? It's been awhile since I've read something so AMAZING!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see how this story progresses (Riven is JUST LIKE ME FRR)

For the 17 chapters I've read so far, the story is quite interesting, especially with an African main character. Unlike many football novels where the protagonist immediately moves to Europe, this one starts in his home country, which adds a refreshing touch—even if, for now, it's just youth football.The author attempted to incorporate romance, but personally, I found it cringeworthy, and even he admitted it. Typically, a football novel with a system features an overpowered protagonist, but in this case, the MC hasn't won anything yet, which is a surprising twist.Overall, I'd recommend giving it a try—at the very least, it's a fresh addition to the limited number of football novels out there.

I like stories of this kind that take you out of reality. The story is touching and the world is well developed so far. The characters have their own personalities and are deep. I'm looking forward to seeing the continuation of the work.