Lydia | ✔️ - Reviews

The young man got into a stance.

He checked his reddened skin, which also had a black sticky layer stuck on it. After washing away the filth, he came out from the lake and dressed up.

He grabbed a card from one of his handcards and slammed it dramatically onto the heart 3 on the table. It was a heart king.

Duke Joao Jiang accepted the water.

My favourite number for my football shirts are 3, 8,12,14 and 44. Number 3,8, and 44 for my England football shirt number.

And all that glitters is gold

He turned his PC off and went straight to his bed then he let the darkness take his consciousness away.

But the meteor men beg to differ

My world's on fire, how about yours?

Switzerland. Grigori HQ. Three and a half weeks after the official end of Great War.

I’m up to chapter 45 in the story and wanted to write a review.TL:DR4.5/10Characters, plot, powers and world building are all interesting, execution is terrible. Ruined the whole reading experianceThis is one of the least concrete stories I’ve read. The powers, world building, and plot are very very interesting. However, the execution was terrible. Timelines of events are so messy and jumbled up it makes it hard to read.The MC doesn’t even feel like the main character at all. Just when I’m getting invested to one character the POV swaps right away. The pacing just feels terrible. Everything feels too fast for no reason, it’s like the author keeps having a change of heart in what they want the story to be.Overall, it just gets harder to read. The plot holes keep adding up, or there’s no foundation for the story to build on.

This book is really intriguing  . I love it the author seems to amaze me with his talent. ???????????????????????????????