The story is really good, the interaction between the characters is very fluid. The situation that the protagonist went through in the past was crucial for his development.
Impeccable writing style. The author's ability to capture the true essence of worldbuilding is astounding. If there's anyone on the contrary, they need literary adjustment. And you can tell them I said it. I'm inspired as a fellow writer.
Very nice, please continue working. I hope it does not stop and does not deviate from the course of the story. I hope it does not involve women too much.