Lunara’s Journey: Betrayal, Love, and Hidden Secrets

The Prologue was a lil' bit of an info dump, but it's alright, probably.Grammar can improve, I already saw the author's comment on it- I won't fault :pensive: Otherwise, the story is so far- heating up, great setting, ez collection

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Is tha author dead, dropped the novel or on hiatus?Because it’s already been 2 months, it’s been so long.Why does every good novel i read just stopped updating?Bruh

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Honestly the story started of well i liked his talent and saw a lot of potential in it ,but i'm getting pissed by this dumb Mc . 1st of all he's 25 years and plays around with his high school sister and submits to her as a beta even as a joke it wasn't that funny as this happened multiple times.2nd The sister is much smarter than our Mc , she devlops his whole island and manages almost everything . The Mc is only useful because of his talent .3rd Mc takes too many fkin breaks when the event starts he doesn't have proper information about it or doesn't even try to acquire it and needs to be spoonfed by others. Not to mention he fights monsters for a whole entire day or week with getting sleep . But he then quits and takes breaks .4th Bro owns the island but doesn't what's going on in it after he opened it for public it's his sister who manages it and my guy doesn't even bother to check unless his sister tells him about it, plus he doesn't have any close realtionship with any of the core members other than knowing he's a core member of his alliance . 5th Mc pulled the save humanity part out of nowhere which feels unreal and he's very naive + he's not a schemer .6th There are too many multiple Pov's other than Mc it's getting annoying especially after ch 150 .

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