" Father don't even want you! You are worthless!" A child, the Emperor 4th born yelled to the small boy, the 5th born. Runt of the family. Beside the 4th born was the 3rd born, who looked so refine and unattached to the world compared to his siblings.
"And you wonder why I try to make a move on you." He looked up and smiled at me. I stared at him for a while and then he burst into laughter. I'm glad he's not mad at me anymore.
As the void was about to be destroyed gold and crimson light flashed before Chrodeas eyes. Before Chrodeas was about to lose consciousness, the devil glanced at him and said "Go, i'll handle this just promise me that you will never stop looking for her" The devil smiled for one last time and immediately went back to look at God as if he never said anything.
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I think this book has a lot of potential. I’d like to see the author put a little more time into forging and adding an additional level of detail to the games. Calling the beast “a moth” or “a mouse” just seems a bit lazy, add some nouns like a “Temporal Void Moth” or “Meta Time Mouse”. Also the stories progression seems a bit off, went from not being able to fight iron rats to fighting a dragon godmod death in like 20 chapters, something like that should happen over 200 chapters. Same with the whole family confrontation, came a bit too early in the story.
