Alright, I just finished reading your latest chapter, and here's what I think:Firstly, can't lie, it's excellent—on par with what you'd expect from a seasoned author. The pacing is tight, the character arcs are progressing naturally, and the tension in the plot feels earned rather than forced. However, I think the main character is taking his situation way too lightly. He is in a forest full of monsters, which could easily kill him. To add to that, he doesn't know anything about the forest he is lost and his helper, his phone, is all but reliable. Yet, somehow someone who chad alled himself a coward isn't freaking out much and can still think straight with an intelligence of average seen from his status.Secondly, he never had a point where he broke down or reflected on his past life. It wasn't like he had no one—his sister was still alive before he transmigrated; however, he never once thought about it.And lastly, I'm really enjoying the book, as such It feels off trying to find holes in such a good book so I'd stop here also I hope to see more in the upcoming chapters.--
