Little freak Jezebel (you sit high atop the kitchen counter) - Reviews

"Then shut up and get on , we have to hurry." I said starting the scooter again after refilling.

Not just him.

After setting the pheasant on the alter, something really odd happened. Instead of like a normal sacrifice, witch you let blood run on the alter. This time after putting the burning pheasant on the alter looked like it melted into the alter no blood, no screams.

And all that glitters is gold

"Playing? What kind of game?" Light asked with a little shock.

Close to being caught up so making a review. I believe the story is well written where as long as you like the type of story it is it won’t disappoint.The world is made well giving an idea of the size but not more than what is needed. The character interactions are enjoyable and have some depth. I enjoyed the mc as he is the type who lives by his own code which may be overall good but can involve dealing with illegal or more ‘evil’ characters to an extent if it can further his goals. He is more comfortable manipulating in the shadows but progressively does more in the open as he grows stronger. Would highly recommend to read the free chapters to see if you like it. Also the free chapters provided enough in my opinion to get a good grasp on the characters and story.

this story is a good getting stronger and getting revenge story.   the plot so far has been straight forward and easy to understand. The early chapters are rough.  lots of scene transitions are missing and names are mixed up making it difficult to follow.   this gets cleared up but it's not perfect.the plot is pretty decent, humor is good.   the skills op has are grounded and very little of it has been "plot armor" though he does get overly cocky.  (as of 130)the world itself could be filled in a little better.  our main character knows a lot but never really justifies knowledge of obscure things.   but at the same time now that History has changed he at least is not omniscient and is only knowledgeable about "famous" things.it is good and I hope the author keeps it up pros:not harem heavymain character is strong and cleverrevenge filledcons:editing and name switching makes some chapters hard to follow the world building could use a little morepeople sometimes appear without introduction