Life After Death by Ice Cream - Reviews

     The kids started grouping on their own again looking nervous now. "Then what should we do..." Marnesi pouted as she was hugged by Pepper comfortingly. The kids shifted their feet anxiously waiting to hear more. Looking at them, Monica said "We still have to go to the oasis! But we have to be quick and careful who knows what's waiting there? if we're lucky we can stay there for a week, if not we have three days."

He looked at the two people bickering. At least the Lord has someone on his side who really cares about him. The city and the villages around soon will be cleaned of those dirty people, stricter inspections will stop machinations and with everyone's help, this city will turn into the safest place in the country.

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

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I just love the story line I mean it soo good

Good story start. Nice characters, funny! It has a lot of good descriptions and the story has a lot of potential. It’s fun to read and well written.

a review would be nice guys or comments per chapter ? or should i stick to reading mahnwa? ? but i felt like i should finish what i started.. i still have 3 chapters left that i have to edit. but oh.. my wifi would be cut later at midnight.. what should i do? ?? should i upload it all.. or keep it until my wifi came on.. i dont know when will i able to pay it.. maybe if you give me some review even saying my story is crappy and some love and encourage me, i'll pay my wifi immediately. then upload the 3 chapters simultaneously. oh well.. what to do.. ??