Leveling Up in the Apocalypse - Reviews

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understand that there are many benefits to using the other person as an

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

There is no satisfaction reading this novel. Every victory is immediatelly followed by more defeats. It's very methodical, like the author wants to keep the balance 100% of the time (especially when it's a war). It doesn't work like this, war is chaos. It's not a turn based game where one side acts, then the other. Over and over and over and over.

Wow i already read the first 20 chapters and i was not disappointed it is beautiful. I love the story line i pray for the author to have more inspiration

Bro. There are so many problems in your writing. I am just going to point them out for you. No hate. I know how hard it is to write and make up a story.*Suggestions1. Use a writing format.(Ever heard of paragraphs. Ever heard of punctuations. Ever heard of  dialogues.)2. Make a cover image.(Use PixAi to generate images)3. Write a better Synopsis.4. Use proper Chapter Title.*Bad Stuff1. Bad writing.2. Bad format. (It's a Composition and not a story)3. No punctuations.4. No Dialogues.(You seem to have no understanding of writing. You most probably never wrote before (Properly).)(The way you write, can't provide you contract or fans)(As an contracted Author, I can recommend you to read my books (promoting), to have an insight, on how to write properly.)(Your plot is good, but writing quality is garbage)