Let me the one to Save You - Reviews

"You're going with me. Dead or alive."

Me:and if you don't let's not say

"Language, sensei." Obito and Rin chorused, amused.

And fantasy is just fantasy."

(Sky) "No, why?"

Vice headmaster Shang Baien nodded and smiled back, "Headmaster, that is not correct. This time, Kargath Academy has more than one genius; rather there are two. These two are Shangyang Xiang Tian and Tieta."

"IYEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH SEEEE YOUUUUU MYYYY SUCKKKKEEEER SONNNNNNN!" My father answered with his Madisgood accent.

Bruh Mc speaks as if he is an 9 years old sometimes its just hard to read the conversations especially when he was confessing at chapter 8-9. And then another annoying thing is that the Mc is called the older brother at the start but then suddenly became the younger brother ?

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??

You know when a webnovel is written by an amateur when its title has grammatical errors. "I can mind-reading" lol

The writing style is clear, but at times, it feels a bit rushed or inconsistent. While the core ideas are solid, there's room for improvement in terms of flow and emotional depth. The pacing could be better, as certain moments feel either too slow or too abrupt.

This book is just a feeling in and of itself. Read the first chapter and for a moment I forgot I was reading a novel ?Great work author ?