Legion Of Naruto - Reviews

"Dokter yang merawatnya menceritakan semuanya padaku. Bahwa Yoona tidak ingin seorang pun mengetahui penyakitnya, terutama aku. Ia tidak ingin aku meratapi kepergiannya, ia tidak ingin melihat air mataku." terduduk lemas mendengar pernyataan itu. "Sehun-a, apa yang harus aku lakukan? Apa aku harus tetap seperti ini? Aku benar-benar gelisah. Ditambah Siwon memberi kabar bahwa kini ia sedang koma dirumah sakit. Aku tidak sanggup melihatnya, rasanya aku ingin mati saja." jantungnya seakan berhenti berdetak. Sehun tak mampu bernafas. Ia baru mendengar itu, bahwa Yoona sedang koma.

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after 30 minutes.

                  Two hours pass  

I know I've never been a reliable author with all of my abrupt stops and breaks, writing various novels and not finishing even a single one of them.

"What do you mean? What's a siren?" Though she spoke as if it had nothing to do with her, she spoke more calmly than before and her eyes turned ruthless for a split-second before adjusting her attitude back to the way it was before.

She looks up at me with a "How could you do this to me" look in her eyes. With a small chuckle I say, " Come on. We're going outside, to play in the snow." Umbreons seems to consider her options at this moment, because she just sits there with a lost look for a few seconds. With a spiteful "Umb" she hops off the couch and heads toward the back door.

"Amaterasu" Itachi calls as he releases the power instantly without any charge up and to his surprise the entire general area ignites in a black flame that while still as hot was weaker due to it being more widespread with less Chakra powering it. 'This is interesting, while not as devastating as it is when its charged, its more widespread and could help me should I find myself surrounded' Itachi thought as he pats Chopper on his head

great read, to be true i don't like novel with female lead but this novel is different, no extra drama but pure emotion, Mystery setup was also ?. this is only possible when you have experience of novel writing and have read bundle, author have both. sir i am really looking forward to next chapter. you don't really have to rush chapter release such delicate and perfect work needs time. thanks for the novel

Strong debute. Hope to disclose more of the story!

Very intriguing book, excited for the new chapters.  The plot is interesting and characters well described. Well done, author.

Everything is great. This webnovel is just my type and I'm pretty sure it will gain popularity soon if it just unfolds nicely and i was not sure about the background tho