The novel started off in a intriguing manner describing each details and necessary informationThe use of realism in Thornwood academy brought the vivid image of the story.I love the the presentation of powers, and especially Lilith emotions.Good job author
Author did a great job with the character presentations, giving an indepth details of their personality and emotions.
story line is slow paced and not rushed, giving readers time and details to understand what's going on in a chapter , good work!
Although there are a few tweaks you need to make in the world background and the character design, the story overall is fresh and has a huge amount of potential so keep it up
Author did a great job with the character presentations, giving an indepth details of their personality and emotions.
story line is slow paced and not rushed, giving readers time and details to understand what's going on in a chapter , good work!
Although there are a few tweaks you need to make in the world background and the character design, the story overall is fresh and has a huge amount of potential so keep it up
The novel started off in a intriguing manner describing each details and necessary informationThe use of realism in Thornwood academy brought the vivid image of the story.I love the the presentation of powers, and especially Lilith emotions.Good job author ?
Author did a great job with the character presentations, giving an indepth details of their personality and emotions.
story line is slow paced and not rushed, giving readers time and details to understand what's going on in a chapter , good work!
Although there are a few tweaks you need to make in the world background and the character design, the story overall is fresh and has a huge amount of potential so keep it up ??
