I'm really trying my best in making the story interesting. But I'm sure that the story is really interesting and enjoyable with enough character development, world background and so on
Too early to judge the story but I'm leaving this review. Will come back again once this reaches 30+ chapters. Mc is bit sassy through out the entire story. There is also a system which somehow gives him mission and quest what to do
Amazing start! The plot's got me hooked, and I'm loving the characters. Huge potential here! Can't wait to see where the story goes from here. You're a talented writer - keep shining!
