Lazing Off In The Clan, I Awakened The Immortality System - Reviews

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translation becomes bad with each character

This story could have been little interesting if the character design , world background was better . There are many inconsistency in the plot one moment he is talking then suddenly next chapter he is doing something entirely different . story is not connected at all its like every chapter is not connected there are many time where chapter and plot is repeating . It is very tiring to read this . I sincerely hope that that the can be edited again and little changes are made so that it can become readable. I still have this in my library hope see the Improvement .

I wanted to like the book, but so far out of 16 chapters about 6 of them have been about him stealing from the kitchen

Not worth. It’s basically mtl and I can hardly understand what the story is hoping to accomplish. I thought it would be fun to see another lazy system, but this guy seems very scheming and not lazy. Uncle-grandmaster is still the ultimate lazy novel

Мда конечно это самая хорошая книга которую я когда-нибудь читало, так как здесь есть все изюминки которые мне очень нравятся, обожаю этот роман, всем советую прочитать это

No consistency. MTL translation. 5 stars are either bots or people who love trash novels. Nothing else to say.

Very Boring and to much wasted on a basic Little  sister that likes to act likes MC maid......