Last King of Avalor - Reviews

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Although the update is slow and I'm pretty greedy for the new chapter, I love this story. Every day I checked to see if there is a new update and got disappointed when there is none. So I hope that you don't drop this novel. Cause if you want to drop it, please let me know beforehand that way I can be papered.

Damage: 30   

Amirah laughs. "Well, you'll be the first one." She pauses, before smiling mockingly. "And you're in denial, so it doesn't count."

He was blown away by the force of the kick, he was powerful like she was portrayed to be in the stories but something was off...

'Maybe, this is a routine?' River thought puzzled as he followed Sean who despite behaving like a butler is the one leading him to the classroom instead.

Narrator's POV

     They interrogated us, examined us as they want. Who the hell think they are?

A good start! i love how the story starts so far, i havent seen any grammar mistakes that ruin the flow of the story though it's only 11 chapters as of now i'm sure this will get alot more attention around the 30/35 mark, readers want to binge so don't be discourage if you dont have any traction just yet ^^ keep at it author