Land Sword Immortal - Reviews

        Alam ng mga kaibigan niya na ayaw niya ng commitment. Ayaw niya ng seryusong relasyon.

「I, did my best, you know...? Therefore...sono,... reward me, a lot, please...?」

"Kuharap kau belum melupakan perkataanku 5 tahun yang lalu." sedikit perih mendengar itu. Sehun segera berbalik dan melangkah menjauh. Entah mengapa, rasanya ingin menangis mendengar itu. Tapi segera kukuatkan diri.

She was Nelliel Tu Odelschwanck, and the situation was War.

Made it hard for Jack to continue on the offensive unimpeded as his panting became a wheezing and his body became drenched in sweat.

"Yuck.... I mean whaaaaaa...." I'm really shocked from what I saw. I thought Sis Chloe would not do any thing foolish that would ruin her look, I mean. Is she not ashamed? There were a lot of people looking at her. Well and also Dad.

Souma's apartment in Ibushi hadn't stood well against the ages.

"What did you dreamed about?" he asked.

"Yeah! All my injuries have healed now thanks to Asia and I'm just glad that today's our last day, which reminds me… what are we going to be doing for Summer break president?" Issei asks.

"Are you injured?" He asked in concerned.

This book shows promise but why do you hesitate to name characters? I had no idea who was talking to who in the first chapter. Also you might want to check over your paragraphs and slim them down.

girl this is a captivating web novel featuring the remarkable Cha Yoon. girl's journey through endless cycles of life and death is both thrilling and deeply emotional. Yoon’s brain and strategic thinking make her a relatable and inspiring character, as she confronts her past and strives to alter her fate.The author skillfully weaves action and introspection, inviting readers to reflect on their own choices. Overall, this novel is a must-read for fans of reincarnation stories, showcasing the power of second chances through Cha Yoon's unforgettable journey