Land Of Fog (re write) - Reviews

Pense bastante en la respuesta del sistema.

Author I can offer you advice, people giving donations is very rare so it will be better if you make a website or Blogspot and upload it there and then ADs will be your way of earning money as we can disable AdBlock for your site.

"Kenapa lo duduk disini? tumben, biasanya lo duduk di depan terus," tanyanya.

"Really?" Lin Xu gasped. 'She can't possibly know right?!"

As he was thinking of that he patted the girl's hair and genuinely smiled and said.

Moa Deaie Yer*

I just gave this a read and wow. Now the prologue is what need to be done well, especially in a fantasy setting, if the writer isn't focusing their time to introduce the characters and the immersion of the story, then it just feels like a run-on-a-mill Webnovel story. But after reading, the prologue left me impress. Now for the writing. It is questionable as we have something, for an example, like "*boom*" written down rather than having to describe that an explosion happen and seeing the reactions as it unfold. But world background is there, and character design is perfect. Do I recommend this Webnovel and want to see it become adapted at some point, well yeah

I want to know if the characters that has been added will be (the only) people in the harem, or they aren't part of the harem and they were added randomly ?

Hello guys. I wanted to make sure that you guys know a few things whilst you read this novel. Firstly: mc might seem stupid at the beginning or blatantly dumb. However, this is mainly due to his age, inexperience and immaturity, but i assure you that his development is quick and he stops doing such mistakes and becomes smarter.Secondly, the writing at the beginning might seem immature and such, but i assure you once again that this changes and becomes better.That’s it, i hope you enjoy the novel.

this novel is not only good, it has served as a platform for improving my way of thinking in many ways. I have never seen a better novel than this.

La escritura es bastante buena, y aunque no estoy muy versado en historias de transmigración de este tipo, la historia me parece que está tomando un buen rumbo, espero que siga así autor-san.

superb story that can make you stay but the updates are slow