Kimi no Michibiki: Rebirth of the Soul - Reviews

Let me be honest with this story the 1st 30 chapter is a very tough on the reading as a lot of grammatical sentence continuity and spelling mistakes.  With chapters being short for the 1st 50 or so on top of the generic plot/character progression. I would hold off until the writer gets an editor to proof read his current chapters and go back through and edit the existing ones because their are sentences that don't make sense.

Am I the only one that laughed at the synopsis? I don't know why but I just found it funny that Gaia said no and then got destroyed because of it.

???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

The writing and grammar are horrible, but the novel itself is pretty good.We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say itInside, we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you(Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you upNever gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

So I mean. I finished volume 1. I have very mixed feelings about this. The world, story, development, mystery are all superb. The writing quality is excellent. The update frequency is rather low but I’m just glad they are still going. Now for the negatives. It seems that every single person the MC becomes invested in emotionally or physically romantic or not just gets shipped off somewhere or dies. The first two women he liked they just moved and ghosted. The second romantic encounter he develops a strong bond and feelings with the woman for her to die in his arms. I guess I’d just like maybe one(?) partner who’s and excellently written character to not be killed off as soon as they are fully fleshed out? It’s just a downer and makes me not want to keep going because they made such interesting characters, and it would feel like a replacement or copy to have someone with a similar personality or way of talking. I’ll keep going for the 2nd volume and hope it gets better in that regard because I truly do like the story and will update my thoughts at that point here. Thank you author hope you’re well.

go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen go jiang chen

Seems interesting enough but it seriously needs an editor to help correct all the run-on sentences. The main character so far seems pretty dim witted as he wanders around like a tourist. Hopefully it will improve with time but who knows.

I came searching for a good sports novel. Stumbled upon this gem. Binged this novel and I can't get enough of it. MORE MORE MORE I WANT MORE

Good evening and once again, but no less important: Thank you for the chapter. As for this story, I admit that at first I didn't have high expectations. I thought it would be difficult for a tree to captivate me as much as Yasenia, but I was positively surprised. Liu Shu also has charisma and the chapters are a lot of fun to read. The different ways of thinking between the races and the pink fairies themselves are great attractions in this story and also add a lot of tension to the plot. (Example: As much as the pink fairies want to defend Liu Shu and are willing to die in this effort. They're not as strong as the maids and Tatiana, so I'm much more apprehensive about the tree and the lovely pink fairies than I am about the Dragon. Who, in addition to her own strength and cunning, still has Tatiana, Valeria, Mirror, Maids, Harem... and a whole range of allies). I kind of underestimate that Yasenia will cope with whatever the Heavens throw at her, but Liu Shu won't. Yasenia's ability is a trait developed from her efforts and I really like this hard-working MC that our Dragon is. But I have to admit that Liu Shu's naivety and fragility also have their charms. In short, you're writing two very good stories with immensely different but equally captivating protagonists.-Suzushiro

"Whispers Across the Continents" is an ongoing novel that promises a captivating blend of mystery, romance, and adventure. Set against the stunning Swiss valleys and the dark underworld of America, it follows Ana and Dominic as they unravel ancient secrets and confront their intertwined destinies. The rich descriptions and complex characters keep readers eagerly awaiting each new chapter. With well-timed plot twists and emotional depth, this story is a compelling journey that leaves you wanting more. Highly recommended for those who love a gripping, evolving narrative!

However, the man didn't admit that it was no miracle, just the deal he made with the devil.

     Cultivation: 0.2