AMAZING .. A Novel idea , great execution.. even his seemingly cheat in later parts comes from his own hard work rather than handed it to him ... And there is immense potential in this story to become the next big thing.. i hope it will ...still need few comercial elements.. everything still in the beginning... but there is a flow to the seemingly monotonous and unique cultivation novel that just draws u in ... go author
This is a novel about a guy who transmigrates to the body of a sect master of a destroyed sect. He is reborn with a sect building system that is based on a (mobile?) game he played in his previous life. Unfortunately the author chose to write the novel in the style of making the main character look cool is more important than the story and world building. Even just looking at the free chapters it is already clear that thr plot armor is far stronger than that of most novels in the genre. It goes so far that world building doesn't always make sense with what the mc does and very often motivations for actions taken by characters is questionable. And even though the author tries to make it look like the mc can be in danger but bc the plot armor is so obvious there is never any suspense about the mc winning or losing a fight. In some fights the author even just straight up says the opponent, who is a major realm stronger than the mc, cannot win before the fight even starts. This novel can also be explained as a not so original idea delivered with mediocre writing quality and storytelling. Having said that I have also seen many novels who done far worse but don't have expectations when reading this, it is a time filler at best.
I like this book very much. But i hope the release rate will be higher. This book is too interesting, i cannot wait. .....,.,.,.,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,,.,.,,.
To be sincere, this is an actually good book. I love the main character, and the way the overall story is developing. I'm looking forward to more amazing chapters author, keep up the good work.
the main character like bearsAuto 5 stars from meit does have a slight feel of another novel on here that has surpassed 3000 chapters but I still like it
Hey everybody, author here, this is my maiden voyage with a novel. A lot what you read will be edited (imperfectly) by me so I only implore you to read and give me any feedback and reviews you can on Evolve... And thank you for taking the time to read.
"I'm here to recruit a new warrior for our team. That warrior will have the job of dowsing any fire in our path and protect my companions. I intend to train whoever will join me all the way until it becomes a tank-turtle. I can't guaranty the one who join me will stay in the main team and I will leave in less than ten years and probably never come back but, by then, if you aren't willing to follow anymore, you should be more than strong enough to fare for yourself."
The spectators are wondering if Vali and his team are able to forces Irene's team to let out their true strength. Even Sirzechs and co are hoping that Vali has equal power with them at the very least. That way they can have a little bit of reassurance if the worst scenario were about to happen...
Looking at the father and mother who were asleep, Xiao Feng couldn't help but feel the warmth of his heart, and the corner of his mouth was also swayed, and then he climbed into the bed quietly. The bed is a short bed of about 30 centimeters. It is just like the height of Xiao Feng, just climb up and down.
She was one of the Emperor's concubine's niece, so it was clear that she came from a noble family. In fact, she came from one of the most powerful families in the kingdom. Her aunt was one of the Emperor's consort.
