I've married the richest man, who still cares about the scumbag ex-hu? - Reviews

I’ll be honest I have been generous is my rating. But i want to support this novel as I find it much better then many others. I like the story, I like the fact the MC is not bloodthirty since the start and has flaws, and I like how the theory of the word has been well though.What I think that needs to be improved. Generaly the english (for a non-native) is better than many novel out there, but some passage miss a verb or we go from present to using past and it makes the reading a bit complicated. In addition the explainations of the world theory are sometimes confusing wich is sad as we can guess the author put a lot of efforts in it.The plot is a bit forced and the swich to different point of view/secondary characters without a clear introduction or cut makes the reading sometimes very difficult (but still the story is better than many out there!)The only thing that really makes me furous is to see how cluless the MC is of the world outside. I know he is a dropout but still he must has been exposed at school or home in is pre-teens to all the magical parts of his world ... right now it feels he is as clueless as the reader regarding magic wich is in my point of view absolutely not normal and possible. This makes the MC looks stupid sometimes and I found it irritating.Keep going author! Writing is not easy! I wish your success.

Congratulations for planting your first plant, the blood origin tree

"I'll eat this whole house," said Average Maggot God. "Just you watch!"

… There's… There's no way that Lucas wasn't there!!

از اینکه درست حدس زده بودم نیشم وا شد و رفتم تو کلبه تا ببینم چه خبره که با دیدن جنازه ی کرکسی اونجا سریع زدم بیرون!!

To the onlookers, the child had been in the middle of the road until the child suddenly disappeared and reappeared beside his mother while an oddly dressed beauty patted the child's head before disappearing in a flash.

              Zemin Yan was well aware that his level of cultivation and his status were not adequate to keep close to that senior, much less have a conversation with him. However he knew in his deep inside had this desire to be stronger, he had this strange certainty that he could reach the same level as this cold senior, even if his body constitution was a traitor. Of course, this was a misunderstanding on the part of Zemin Yan, Zhong Liang's motive not to talk is simply that he does not have this habit and also did not know how to approach a small child.

"Your mother has been hurt? Are you trying to joke now? We both know that your mom suddenly has changed before that controversies. You don't need to defend her Jason. She is indifferent already before that issue..." She said it trying to stay calm, but the bitterness was in her voice.

We rose from the ditch and opened fire on the guard towers, cutting down the Imperial sentries before they could even react. Playing it safe, I ordered Marian to shoot the searchlights as I advance to the front gate.

They began to struggle and fight. The objective, pin the other hand on the table. Dewdrop then pinned the guard's hand nearly knocking him off his seat.

Jungkook:"Wait, are you still made at me? I'm Sorry...about last night. I just wanna be friends with you...please?"

The release schedule is slow but the story itself has potential. It is mostly about modern families and the relationships between those in them. Seeds of romance in the story has also been planted in the early chapters and I think there will be a great dynamic between the two MCs if they end up together.