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Once everything was ready, Princess Lingchen allowed her maidservant, Ah Zhen to put a thick coat around her body before the Princess climbed up her horse. Vice General Fei Liu led the group in front along with a few other guards. Mingyue chose to ride beside her with Yang Yun staying closer to them. Because of his injury, Prince Lu Wei had to ride a carriage with guards surrounded him.

Ice - I'm fine

(Hahahaha, did not I tell you that you would like, this is Earth the cradle of my kind)

Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

„What's wrong with you, Ezio? Benson, bring me back. I'm not some tamed monster!"

The phase of the story is Getting boring Tbh... Author seems stretching 1 Chapter into 5 or more so chapters.. And Eva's and MC's reunion seems kind of lackluster... And what's with this MC? .. Can't he be more 'Honest' to his Wife?!!. .. It feels like MC didn't even trust Eva and also for the latter... Everytime MC introduces a Woman character.. Eva seems to be Overreacting and this MC reacts like TF?... Cant he be more truthful to his 'Wife'. .. Instead of worrying about His circumstances bout his wife matter... Can ignore his Adopted sister or something? ?.. Adding her into the story seems Lame and she doesn't really have worth in the story so far.. ..  And I just realize that MC frequently asking soooo many questions to System... He still can't believe figure out himself dispute his 'Maturity '? He's still a Naive and Braindead For me despite those 'adventures' whatsoever. I'm quite 3njoy this for Soo long but the repeating scenario where mc always attract troubles... And him being overconfident and thinks that he has an upper hand in a fight but later realizing that the enemy has a hidden trump cards is irritating... There's no end for this scenario and I'm sure this will be not the last.. Meh.... Lame NGL..

I have read 24 chapters. Let's just say it started off well. We know a little about Mc and its surroundings. We still do not know the characteristics and limits of the newly awakened MC's powers. A story would be great if it wasn't for the sister thing I hate the most.

your writing is pure magic and your storytelling is incredible. This has become my newobsession.

The new book is here!! After waiting for so long, my sister finally uploaded it!  (,,> ᴗ <,,)Friends who like apocalyptic stories, you must try this book! I say this not because I am this author's sister, but because I have read every chapter available in her stockpile. (͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)As we all know, the author has a very strong ability to write about romance, feelings, and character growth. With this as the main course, coupled with her newly acquired writing skills for battle scenes, scheming, and multiple plotlines, you can expect a fun and exciting story! ٩(ˊᗜˋ )وGive this story a try and you might be surprised to find a gem! (˶ˆᗜˆ˵)

Really great work so far, and I'm writing this at about 7 chapters, hoping to see more of this, although it starts of typical and cliche, I'm hoping to see more from this.