When I came to, I was flat upon the grassy floor. I could feel a warmth behind me. It was soft and fluffy. When I looked to my right I could see Ellinor keeping watch.
"Stop doing that, Jessa babe." Tyson's voice sounded strangled. "We made a pact, no inappropriate thoughts of you. You're making it a little hard right now."
well, I started it randomly but it was quite goodthough world background may seem somewhat lackingthe ability of mc is new and refreshingits definitely worth a read
I really love this story and I’d like you to continue on with this story and I encourage you to continue making great stories like this one but maybe work on the pacing of the story a bit for your next story.
I like the dynamics of the first chapter it’s a nice start just I feeling the prose and writing seems a bit bland and lack’s imagery. To should have on the pride to feel natural in the story and he will be good
