Writing quality can be better without the shortcuts of words sometimes. Words like nvm and btw just feels wrong when reading a book. Ik its easier and all that and everyone understand the meaning but it just feels wrong and could take down a lot in quality.Story development is to early to say something about at the moment. Character design is good about a 4 star id say. Explanations about characters could be made better, but overall design is quite good.The world building is also too early to say much about. The world building is a slow subject that should take time and many chapters that you dont have at the moment? Good read id say but could be better. Ik you want to make the best book you can and i hope you can make a much better storyline in the future when i come back for a reread. Hope you make a great book author.
