In Too Deep: a mafia story - Reviews

In Too Deep: a mafia story
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Wow got some good work going on down here I'm here to support you bro, and thereby recommend reads on this amazing journey as it starts hope to see more from this
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Has MHA vibes. Also a bit similar to 'Sky High'. Feels a bit over the top in its presentation but that fits what the author seems to be going for. The writing does feel a bit unpolished. I don't know if it's a narrative choice or developing skill. The story seems good, though I'm not a fan of how it's written. I like stories to be more livable than comedy. This feels more like a more realistic cartoon. Just not my kind of story.
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Currently at chapter 21. Congratulations Healing System for joining the ranks of "Barely Teens MC". Nothing much to say but good novel so far.
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Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.
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past chapters are making this story to down hill everything is perfect but the tone of this novel make legal and romance kind of unnecessary and a nerf

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