I really love the story but the chapter 2 and 3 is a bit confusing to me too so i gave the story development a 4 star rating but I really recommend this to my friends for real!!
I have no words you write long chapters that all connecting stories the bits in the beginning are a little eh but otherwise the story is amazing it's about a cat
Your dedication and hard work are truly impressive and deserving of recognition. Keep up the excellent work! ?? With a bit more practice, you can enhance your writing skills even further. We all believe in you!
Actually very interesting plot , same with characters but make it unique more use different methods to elevate your imagination and let it take you to heightsss.Not a very good story but a readable if you have time
