Needs work. More time spent fleshing out the storyline while also developing dialogue will greatly reduce how chaotic the novel feels IMO. This may potentially be due to english transation or english not being first language. Only read first 20 chapters and like the premise of OP shield MC. As the author gains experience writing should get better. Cover art is entirely misleading and should be changed ASAP!!! Good luck author i‘m rooting for you!
