If I Gave You My Last Life - Reviews

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

'I telled Mary how it would be,' he said: 'I knew what Mr. Edward' (John was an old servant, and had known his master when he was the cadet of the house, therefore, he often gave him his Christian name)- 'I knew what Mr. Edward would do; and I was certain he would not wait long neither: and he's done right, for aught I know. I wish you joy, Miss!' and he politely pulled his forelock.

Riku: I had a feeling that you were connected to the fox ever since I saw that red chakra and then I saw that tailed form that you took.  I admire that you want to assist him.  I have seen that Gaara has a good side and I think that a lot of that is owed to you.  I will assist you in protecting the jinchuriki from the Akatsuki.

"Okay, Carl, you're a smart and good kid, why are you doing this?"

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The story draws you in with hints of mystery that pull you into wanting to know more about the characters. All the whole using visual storytelling in the design of characters and their environment.

This man has writing potential but no motivation. Wish he would publish the next chapter soon.

this looks promising just don't add poison and we're good author.

This is an impressive story I'll advise everyone to read, try it out and you will find out it's very interesting and I wish the author good luck in his work and I hope he doesn't stop writing

ah....I will not say that I didn't like it ..but it's good you can give it a try ?