Idol Revive: If I Don't Debut, I'll Disappear - Reviews

Xia Meilin suddenly remembered the owner of the voice. It was actually Lu Xian Yu! She met him back then in London, she has even mistaken him as Lu Yifeng.

I've only just started reading this novel and so far i'm really enjoyig it but it seems to be missing a chapter between 21 and 22? part one of chapter 22's part two seems to be missing.

Pretty good start. Could use a bit of editing for smoother transitions. The story moves pretty quickly and I feel like I’m missing some background information on the characters. It could be brought  in later chapters to make the story more well rounded. Other than that, keep up the good work author. This story has a lot of potential.

Question for the author. Is that a picture of Asuna from SAO as the book image? I’m sure the series is great but I just wanted to clear that up because it had me sitting here trying to figure it out for like 5 minutes. lol not really anything negative about the story though.

Waiting for more updates, I can't locate the new book of this