"My point is, I gave prince Roland, and I could see he drink it." Tyre's face tightened, she lowered her voice subconsciously. "And he indeed dropped down as I thought he would, for a moment, before waking up and everything change."
Hippolyta paled at the last part as they knew if the said enemy manage to free Ares then only the gods can defeat him which isn't going to happen soon as they are all holed up in olympus because of Zeus' cowardice. [Triple the guards at the Prison and make sure none may be able to step atleast a hundred meters of it's vicinity!] ordered Hippolyta as although she may not show it to his Sisters, Mark can easily recognize the smell of fear from her. The god of war really did a number on the Amazon.
A novel with a good potential, but the way of writing lacks. It's like some Japanese manga or anime nowadays where the MC is naive/has anger issues/no character development/full of awkwardly portrayal.These are the list that I see it lacks:1. Story development is not good. Too fast development. MC jumps from one scenario to the other that there are no breathing.2. The awkwardly interaction of characters. I read and some of the characters are like (I am a mysterious one) vibe.
