writing is smooth only some mistakes wich are just not putting the talking indication or the ", i cant say for the updates now because its still in voting, the story development is progressing at a good pace nothing too confusing but it does not show how mc (bingley) got his system nor his pov most of the time i read till the last chapter and the mc appeared most on the hundred birds exhibition chapters author needs to put more of bingley's pov and also some things dont make sense for me like how a pigdeon carrier family can buy so much gold/other precious matials but that and needing more mc pov are the only bad things in my opinion
