I want to be yours: a love story - Reviews

Jaune: I think I understand a bit.

They were facing each other, and he was trembling, he did not know what to do at that moment, but then the orc spoke to him "This place is for the death, do not linger here unless you want to joins us" The orc laughed at him as he finished. The Shepherd was pale, still not knowing how to react, but then another voice came from his sides "Leave, leave this place, it is our home". More and more orcs began to appear on the distance. It seemed as if they were an army, covering the meadow as far as he could see. The shepherd did not need to be told twice, he turned and ran.

"Terim kasih master"

-Dexterity: G-

Fases: 4 partes.

I need to get myself away from this place

Thought the book was great, though definitely need to break up longer paragraphs.Don’t know if it applies to you but, at least for me writing shorter helps you read through it on the phone.Anyways, I added the book to my collection. And gave you a 5 star as well as reading through the book. Hopefully this helps you!!

Hello it's author here ,if you have any questions or anything you wanna talk about ,you can drop it here ,and also please read up to chapter 24 , from that chapter on i will make the book follows the actual title, Thanks for reading and giving this noob author book a chance

This is my favorite book in this genre. The characters are perfectly and realistically written, but the best part is the harmony between them. It makes me happy every time I read this.

The story effectively describes the world's background and leaves absolutely nothing to the imagination, keep it up!

I like the vivid scenery, especially from the first chapter?maybe it's because it was in audio, but, Bro has got talent, although he left me questioning if malekai is the Mc or it's sera?