This is my first-time reviewing, so please forgive any errors in my writing. Here are my thoughts:
1. The story has potential; while it's too early to judge its overall quality, the beginning is strong and the concept intriguing.
2. Characters: As of now, it's difficult to comment on character development; more time is needed to form an opinion (too early to tell).
3. World-building: The preliminary chapters indicate a substantial world-building effort; it appears to be better than most, but not at a divine level.
4. Translation: Given that it's a hosted novel, the grammar is likely to be well-done, with minimal mistakes – based on my previous experience with such novels.
In summary, that's what I can currently assess. I recommend giving it a try since it's only 10 chapters long.
Enjoy your read! ?