I Somehow Became The Almighty Creator, l can create anything: Be Ware - Reviews

"You. Had. One. Job. " he laughed, although veins were visible on his forehead. "Take it before it gets departed. You return to me empty handed. You're more of a sorry excuse than that of Bellamy. "

Janet: oh?  so this is what u have been doing,  your energies have been fully merged and you now have the effect of both at the same time. as expected of my elder brother.  this is going to be to most interesting spar ever.

Sol Maron was a friend that I made seven years ago after I saved her from bandits that attacked her village. She has grown up to be quite strong-willed and direct about what she wanted. It was actually quite refreshing when compared to being surrounded by nobility that most of the time lie as if it was second nature to them. The last time I saw her, was when she had just gotten her grimoire and went on a trip to improve her skills as she wanted to be a magic knight. There was also Gordon Agrippa, a quiet man with a weird pale face. He is also my friend... I think. It is a bit hard to say as he usually speaks very quietly, but I could feel his good intentions despite his magic being the polar opposite of his personality. In a way, it reminded me of a weakened version of the corrupted grail. An evil and cursed magic so to say.

This isn’t a bad story by any means. For me, the biggest gripe is the constant POV changes. I understand the author is using them for world-building and plot development, but because they happen so frequently—and often with characters who are nowhere near each other—it feels like you’re trying to read five different stories at once. There are definitely other issues with the book (as many reviewers have pointed out), but none are as frustrating as the relentless shifts in perspective.

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I have been making good with my uploads and I believe have been doing well in the writing department. I won't say the story is perfect but at least give it a read

I shamelessly review myself 5 star...By the way (*^-゜)vThanks! for giving my novel a try.

Good storyline. Happy to see that no unnecessary bloodshed from the word get go. All the best for the future chapters. Keep the update rolling daily ?

The novel is very unique, but everything looks too packed together. It's hard to follow anything.Try introducing new things and people a step at a time.