I Picked Up My Father Who Left Home - Reviews

So much to do, so much to see

Very interesting premise. your writing style is similar to that of a light novel without the illustrations of course.your book has great world building, the explanations in the earlier chapters makes it very easy to follow and paint a mental picture. The main character's motivation and drive makes him very interesting, not one dimensional.I look forward to seeing the direction it takes

just started reading and.....I'll just read and see

Even a tiny spark of fire  can turn into a majestic flame when given the time and here I see a spark worthy of turning into a flame that can engulf the world. improve your grammar lulululululululu