This needs to get picked.
Flaws:
-Poor worldbuilding
-The cultivation realms have not been explained yet (CH 19)
-Story is shallow
-Slightly wonky translations, still very understandable though. I’ve read far worse, this is very much tolerable.
Merits:
-Fun read.
-Better than most of the stuff that gets picked nowadays.
-Decently conceptualised system.
Overally I’d give this a 3/5 it I’m giving it a 5 cuz I want it to get picked.