I Got a Notification on my Laptop and Got Legendary Powers - Reviews

"You still think this is a lucid dream? You idiot! You just learned this, you know how a lucid dream starts! Also, turning my #&<×@* into a pasture?! Really?" The voice started gaining volume, exasperated.

    "Bersihkan dulu mulutmu."

"Are you angry." Tristan glance at her. He wanted to know what she's feeling right now.

"Benar!!! Siswa siswa gila di halte tadi bebicara bahwa ada Cafe Pc didekat sini!! " Ujarnya dengan langsung bertindak

I turned to the magic king and said.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

When the war of the beasts brings about the world's endThe goddess descends from the skyWings of light and dark spread afarShe guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting

Now this is a very interesting litrpg mainly because of good writing quality and a mc that is evil like our Lord and Saviour Great Love?

The synopsis leaves much to be desired. The exposition at the start of the first chapter feels a little too long but it's bearable. It reminds me of the common light novel trope of Hero vs Demon King. Lastly, the start feels slow compared to the premise of the novel. It likely would be more hooking if the start is a flashback of some sorts to a battle. An extra tidbit here: some descriptions of an object's external features feel half-done as I couldn't imagine it clearly