Okay, I gotta admit... this book is really good. I'm serious!
First chapter in, and I could already feel the vibes. However, things got even more interesting after that.
Rooting for you, Zephyr. Lets do thisss!!!
It is a good novel. The writing quality is excellent . However, I can't seem to like the MC. He is way too prideful ( even with pitiful strength) and arrogant. I hope he gets stronger soon. I would love to see an MC who is ruthless, cunning yet loving to his family.
a very promising, overpower mc. and reincarnation series. indeed the novel keeps the read in hook. i wqant moreeee. ..........................................
Overly fluffed word count, there’s no way in heck I’ll ever pay for chapters when I feel this cheated already, easily able to skip paragraphs and the story not have progressed much at all
I tried reading the first 10 chapters but eventually gave up. just my personal opinion but I recommend that you rewrite the starting chapters. The reason why is because the same thing was said multiple times but in different ways. Why would I want to read about the same thing twice?
I get that because of the constant time skips, you have to reassure the reader that "the mc has yet to change" but it felt strenuous to read and I wasn't told anything new.
Also the world building. You introduced us to the crumbled and war-torn city early on but it wasn't until after a few chapters that I was told that there was an actual group of people living together. Maybe I missed it but there was no explanation for how the (camp?) looked like.
These were just my thoughts and a writer can never cater to everyone so I understand if it was just me that prefers a different style of storytelling.
