I Ended up Raising the Children of the Protagonists - Reviews

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Interesting story. Even though at first I was confused about the concept of this story, slowly I understood. although I'm not completely, but at least I've read up to chapter 115 and it makes me forget about lunch time. This story seems light but able to attract the attention of readers. Most of what I like about this story is the funny moment time from several chapters. (I've forgotten which chapters ?) Good job, authors.

The world-building is great and pretty solid, but something feels off. The crazy female lead, for instance, makes me wonder if she'll start engaging in NTR or create her own harem. Also, they've created this game world, yet they describe it as if the whole world is their enemy. On top of that, the story is really slow, with a lot of filler, in my opinion.

The guard made a box between the house trapping Fluffy and The Witch but Drag was still on top of the roof.

"And that is?" Snow asked, she tried to hide the suspicion in her voice, but that didn't stop the train of thoughts that entered her mind. She knew Nate wasn't a saint, obviously, but he wouldn't be involved in illegal stuff would he? Not that she can actually be certain, as she doesn't know him that well.

2. my personal world which is a combination of castle of black Iron, violet Jade immortal,

Well, who else would put a 5 start review on this work but me, right? so don't mind this review and put your own out there. Just want to experience the feeling of getting a 5 star reviewHaaaaaaa......It does feel great receiving oneJust someone trying to be a writer. I hope you like it!