I was pretty shaken up by that first chapter, which was pretty ruthless and brutal but it introduced the story's personality, which was bloody and not for the weak-minded. I like that there's good writing quality and character design. The detail and hook really brought me in and were quite amazing! The potential I see in this novel is high and I can foresee that it will be a fantastic, one-of-a-kind story.
Echidna : "Ruby, Weiss, Blake, Yang, Tattletale, Qrow, all of them aren't from Lugunica. Along with the Warriors that you have met formerly, the Wardens are from Eldia as well. Does that explain how you are so old and how you know them?"
She then tried calling jin her friend who was sitting next to her in class.. they both sat at the canteen coffee table and were sipping their drinks when diya Recieved another text..
Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?