Melissa is a good MC! your writing style is very good. Just a suggestion, maybe break off some of passages that's too long. It'll help readers to focus more. but overall, it's a really good story!!!
Hi everyone? if you’re seeing this book I recommend you add it to ur library, support and comment on it…this is actually my first time publishing my work and if u feel it needs adjustment and lacks in some areas pls comment…Thank you?
