Absolutely amazing, though I was really mad at the stupid MC, but then again if he was smar or even normal,,,, even slightly below average, that kind of power would have made him op real quick and story would have been kinda bland.
"Love where this fantasy novel is headed! The first two chapters have drawn me in with their engaging characters, immersive world-building, and intriguing plot.The writing is descriptive and easy to follow, making it hard to put down. I appreciate the unique twists on classic fantasy elements.Looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds. Some areas for improvement:- Pacing could be tightened- Character development could be deeper- Conflict escalation would add tensionOverall, great start! Excited to read more. Keep up the good work! 3.t/5 stars.
The tone is very dark at first but is executed well and feels natural. In just two chapters, the author made me feel connected to the MC and his struggles. Before I knew it, I found myself rooting for him. As long as he keeps uploading, the book will definitely become a gem.
