I Became Rich by Eating Melons in the Era of Literature (1970s) - Reviews

"Leader-sama." The Akatsuki members respectfully nod, catching the attention of everyone.

"Hmmm , youre Warrant Officer Alezander Zaitsev Right ?"

Happy: Awesome! I already have an idea lined up for you. I'll give you 50 rubees.

I go to get up, still in my dazed state to turn around to look at him. "The fucking hell was that fo- Oh..." Well. Now I see what he means by oh, he's managed to blow the top of Eight's head off. I notice him lower his arm. "Uh... It can recover from that right?" He asks nervously.

And all that glitters is gold

I hope you will  continue this unlike all the other white lantern fanfic that where dropped.

Planet: Earth type, heavy gravity, split moon, high background radiation, two dominant races.  The peculiar lunar configuration and the result of a stellar collision, the planet is bathed in an abundance of free energy.  Due to the nature of the indigenous animal life, the survival of the colonists have required an edge beyond mere intelligence.  

Very nice......................

Hmm dek could have been better he is like every duo serious guy out there and crash is like the hot headed  one frrr still story seems fresh as if avatars meets tech cadets n shi story is pretty well structured