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So far nice story with good pace. It carries a light tone and seems to move towards a good direction. Hopefully the author will keep up the good work let read another good story ????
Author AK here, 5 stars for self-promoting. If you want a slow-paced novel with a fantasy setting, this one will pique your interest. The first two volumes are mostly about MC's adventure, but the plot will thicken during the third volume. Also, pay attention to the strange incidents in this novel. Hmm, that's it. MC won't be too smart, but not too dumb. He will be more like an average guy. tt ❤️ ❤️ ❤️Anbe Sivam (Love is God)❤️ ❤️ ❤️
It is an interesting story and I want to know what happens so I keep reading. But story is written with overly detailed explanation. So the same thing is explained often in many different ways. Often I can skip half the page because it explains the same thing. And it repeats information to often. It makes me question if the writer is scared that the reader forgot thinks.But because the story itself is nice and it keeps me interested for how the character will develop himself in the further future I want to see it until the end. Hopefully the writer will know tro time that it is not required to explain some think repeatedly. Atthis moment it can be seen as filler story but I don’t think that that is the intention of the writer.
I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
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Hey man, really liked your book, I hope you can get back to writing it. I just found it the other day and couldn't stop reading. Really really hope you will post some more again soon. I do understand that life might have gotten in the way, but I hope you haven't stopped writing all together.
?? this is so sad what about her made the zombie only want to rape her and on top of that why did guy kidnap her . Wth didnt girl unlock her faster n just sat there watching.
The story has a lot of potential, it is a great idea, but unfortunately has terrible execution. The fighting is explained terribly and the author makes a lot of mistakes, he forgets what he has written already, and English is clearly not his first language
