I am the strongest magician - Reviews

     The ring from the doorbell distracted her thoughts, changing her focus to the person on the other side of the door. Standing up from the canopy, she made her way downstairs towards the door, stepping up to the peephole only for it to be vacant. An eerie sense of being watched filled her senses, as she backed away from the door and towards the living room. The phone rang breaking the silence of the house causing Jazmin to jolt in place with surprise.

"Hah...haha...sudah tidak ada lagi yang tersisa, pemimpin kalian sudah kubunuh...hah...hah...begitu juga kalian...hah..lihatlah kepalanya... Kini berada di tanganku." katanya bahagia enteng, terkekeh keras sampai menggema. Lalu terdiam dengan wajah tanpa ekspresi dan tatapan kosong.

As I looked at Marcus he had two souls,one was overpowering the other,it was Razil.I threw the reaper at him,it sperated the two souls from the body and took them to me,a chain rapped around them I released Razil and put him back into Marcus's body,the soul of Marcus went into the reaper.

ok ok ok I will get some , but before that Zara, the new Boss wants the detail record of  past 5 years account debit  , Zara I can't find the file please help me !!!!

"How can you say such things about your parent." Her mother expression was becoming less calm as she her thick eyebrows dips down.

But, never doubted...

~I put both good and bad in the reviw so scroll down to see both~Good things~Okay so ive only reas about 40 chapters so far so take with a grain of salt buti thunk the author has a really good idea and good direction she went with the story as a whole and the development while fast makes sense for the Mc. there are also hardly any gramatical errors and that makes reading this story that much smoother. another thing i loved about the story is the evolution part as EoC was one of my favorite books and i thought it had a great system.Bad things~Ive only read about 40 chaps in the story but i wanted to say something. In the story you dont explain all of the skills and what they do like the skills she got from the phonix or some of those from the harpys and i just think its bad world building. i can accept that but the kingdom thing when she got back is just terrible i mean they the people there evolved from not even having anything above stone tools to staight up having lamps and a city in like 10 days. Then there is the whole population issue as the coty should only have around 50-100 people when the non combatants were evacuated before the fight but in just like 3 days since that happened there was unprecedented development. it just dosent make sense in my opinion. another criticism i have is that the pacing is just so incredibly break neck that it makes it hard to follow as it took the mc like 20 days to go from being a chicken to killing a phonix and having a kingdom.

Very fun read so far. wish I could get it in a physical format.

The story is nicely passed with interesting events which alter the original story slightly. I cant wait to see where the story goes, the style in which is written is very enjoyable too. Keep up the good work.

it's definitely an interesting story. Has a great start.

absolutely mind-blowing and captivating novel, Author?

Noice book :D