I am the Heiress of the Lost Kingdom - Reviews

I am the Heiress of the Lost Kingdom
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I tired but all this girl does is cry over a boy who mistreated her and tossed her aside like trash. Then, once she sees him again, she still has feelings for him. Why do so many girls get off on being abused. Pathetic
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best story 10/10  just needs some dialogue fixing and spelling mistakesalso monologues are too big and author gets distracted on each monologues but it gets better
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Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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Bro I will support you man, but you gotta do a better job with the MC. He’s is a f*****g beta man. Come on you could portray him better than that. Idk if you plan on fixing his mentality as the story goes on but right now your MC is making story suck. It’s my honest opinion man. Everything else is dandy, your MC is just not cutting it.
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For a transmigrated story, it has a pretty well built world and has a lot of potential. The descriptions are detailed and right in the beginning. I would suggest that since you are using an already existing character, and especially someone from the olden age, he was too understanding of high technology and that breaks character. So be mindful that he is still fighting with swords when you pulled in out of his world.
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anyway he beat them all up and he conqured 300 universes alredy
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" Hmph " Hayato smirks
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Yoww, updateee
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"No sir, I am very excited!"
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Coca-Cola has been a point of legal discussion in the Middle East. In the early 20th century, afatwawas created in Egypt to discuss the question of "whether Muslims were permitted to drink Coca-Cola and Pepsi cola."[82]The fatwa states: "According to the Muslim Hanefite, Shafi'ite, etc., the rule in Islamic law of forbidding or allowing foods and beverages is based on the presumption that such things are permitted unless it can be shown that they are forbidden on the basis of the Qur'an."[82]The Muslim jurists stated that, unless the Qu'ran specifically prohibits the consumption of a particular product, it is permissible to consume. Another clause was discussed, whereby the same rules apply if a person is unaware of the condition or ingredients of the item in question.
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"I'll be down in a sec," I muttered and turned on my heel.
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"Let's do it right away. I want to get my death over with tomorrow. So? Where are you taking my virginity? Take me there already" I gave up. There's nothing for me to do anyways. And it's not a bad thing to experience it before I die.

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