Hyde, Worldwalker Reborn - Reviews

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The writing in the story could do better but if you comment on the story the auther will reply or like it,so if you ever see a mistake just comment it to help the auther out.The auther updates frequently with chapters.Since the auther works so hard leave a lil comment here and there to help keep the auther motivated! They write two stories so I know they must be overwhelmed at times

The carachters are well developed. Updates are very frequent. Could use a little more background to the world but the read is from the MC's perspective. only complaint is sometimes the writing is strange or broken and a few misspelled words but that's forgivable, we are all human. Oh and its funny as ****, great job with the comedic factor of the story.[img=update]

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Rt to the Moon by the way I don't have to go out of town for the weekend and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be  Don't Force Base