It has a great first chapter! Then the cart is really pushed off the cliff, hard and fast. By chapter 5 MC has the rarest metal in the world, gear that no one else can dream of having, has the intelligence of a 5 yr old when he is 18 and has been orphaned for many years. The plot is so thick it might as well be a bulwark shield. To top it all off the writing is everywhere, very hard to read and understand.
