It's a good read so far; the world background is still a bit vague, but maybe it is due to me still being in the early chapters. Story development is well-paced, but writer, you have to increase updating stability.Except for that, this is a story that has potential if properly written.
I just checked ro see y no more chapters r coming out and I saw it was finished... honestly feom the titles of the chapters and where im at in the book is over chapter 600 it seems like it was rushed to be finished... honestly I really really like this book and thought it had a lot of potential and yes a lot of things happen that where unexpected for the main character but its a book and things happen but it was still good and think it shouldnt have ended for at least a little more time... I hope that maybe it gets changed and keeps going a little more and has an ending worth the book and honestly I dont want to emd for a while because I enjoy this book a lot!!
I thought it was great. Actually, I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! It's just the beginning, I know, but the author does an excellent job with visualization. Plus, the story itself is intriguing. Please, Author, give us longer chapters. That's all I ask.
